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We
Contributed by
ravens_death
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 04:18:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We sit here together in the desert scape
We breathe in hot and humid air
We watch the moon and chase the stars
Minds twist into a mass of fury and hate
The world is ours, dominion we comtemplate
Our mortal forms they meet
Our lips they touch silken soft
Our toungues caress our loves expressed
Time melts and nothing matters
Seconds, minutes time elapses
Barriers, bridges, forts, collapses
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2005-05-21 04:18:38]
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Re: We
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by tres_estrellas on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:45:30 AM AEST
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| nice mixture of words. I liked it. |
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Re: We
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by Spike on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 06:55:01 AM AEST
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I loved the melting together of forms, time, structures. A strongly expressed poem.
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