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a confession
Contributed by
juilana
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 12:43:06 AM in AEST
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I was watching you sleep the other day,
And prayed that it would last.
The peace that rested on your face,
I'd never seen in the past.
I was watching you speak a while ago,
And hoped that you would go on.
The way your words, they had no end,
Your spirit seemed so strong.
I was watching you fight the other day,
And prayed my tears would dry.
All this, I knew was done for me,
And couldn't figure why.
I was watching you smile a while ago,
And stared in total awe.
Was it me who made you shine?
Was that triumph that I saw?
And all this time you've waited,
And all this time you've helped,
And all the things you sacrificed.
And all the tears you dried,
And all the pain you soothed.
And all the truths you had to hide,
Without a simple thank-you.
But I was watching you the other day,
And I realixed I can't wait.
To tell you how much I appreciate,
And love you in every way.
Copyright ©
juilana
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2005-05-21 00:43:06]
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Re: a confession
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 12:50:30 AM AEST
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That is a beautiful outpouring love to someone. I feel sure they will cherish it. I know I would if it were said to me. Lovely work.
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Re: a confession
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by say_hello_2_heaven1990 on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 01:23:22 AM AEST
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| I love this poem. It is so beutiful and the words are put together so gracefully. You are a very talented poet,Juliana. |
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Re: a confession
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:30:00 AM AEST
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This was so beautiful and romantic. You have poured your devotion and heart in this.
A well written poem about love and joy.
Jane xx |
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Re: a confession
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:36:52 AM AEST
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This was so beautiful and romantic. You have poured your devotion and heart in this.
A well written poem about love and joy.
Jane xx |
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Re: a confession
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:48:45 AM AEST
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Juilana
Beatiful !
"Would you love me"?
just thought I might ask
The only part that confused me was the anger part.
May you & yours have hppiness each day you live.
A well written poem and so meaningful.
I love it---write more.
Sinned |
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Re: a confession
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by travisk on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 02:12:07 AM AEST
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usually don't like the praise poems, but this one is a cut above.
nice one |
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