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Decision
Contributed by
cOld
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Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 11:38:26 PM in AEST
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I feel a pull between two places,
with satisfaction found in none,
a shadow in the distance, and shade from the sun,
shelter from eternity, is all that feels right,
a protection from the pain, a kindness to kill,
either place is wrong, so live with this desicion, I will.
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Re: Decision
(User Rating: 1 ) by tres_estrellas on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:53:41 AM AEST (User
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yer, I liked it! |
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Re: Decision
(User Rating: 1 ) by LongingFor on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 11:54:18 AM AEST (User
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i like it
i love the part where u said "shelter from eternity"
Keep writing
~Sasha |
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