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Sheild
Contributed by
SimplyMe
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Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 09:20:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I have this sheild
A shield of power, a sheild of pain
A sheild to lose, a sheild to gain
I know this sheild
A sheild that dies, a sheild that lives
A sheild that takes, a sheild that gives
This sheild is
Full of pain, full of sorrow
Here today, gone tomorrow
This sheild is mine
To carry around with me
The sheild that nobody can see
It is unbroken
Untouched
Unharmed
It dies
It lives
It breathes
I am this sheild
We are one
With it i'm half
Without it i'm none
This sheild is mine
This sheild is me
Together as one
We breathe
Copyright ©
SimplyMe
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2005-05-20 21:20:24]
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Re: Sheild
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 05:57:05 AM AEST
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You expressed your thoughts so well
A fabulous write
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Sheild
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 01:22:28 PM AEST
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This is a work of art, i love the difinitive
attitude within the contexed of this poem, your
words r most assuredly from a skilled pen as
well as an aspiering poetess, such as your
self, a lovely presentation if i do say so . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Sheild
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by Jimmato on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:15:48 AM AEST
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I am this sheild
We are one
With it i'm half
Without it i'm none
catch me if I'm wrong, but to me this reads like your sheild is a nice little barrier or mask that you show everyone, underneath it is the real you but to take it off you're naked and nothing. |
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