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you made me want to live
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
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Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 05:51:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a love i dont deserve
in a life i dont deserve to live
to repay you for this happiness
theres nothing i can give
cause there nothing in this universe
that could show how greatfull i am
i could spend forever trying
but i dont think that i can
i dont know what to believe anymore
since ive met you ive ben so confused
but however we where brought together
i know that i cant loose you
im different when i am with you
drive me crazy is what you do
if you could only see the real me
then youd know just how much i love you
but there is one thing that i can do
to show you how much i care
to show you how much you mean to me
i can promis to always be there
a love i dont deserve
in a life i dont deserve to live
to repay you for this happiness
ive decided that im goin to live
Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
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Re: you made me want to live
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by emokid on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 07:23:00 PM AEST
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yea but what's the fun in that dying is funner j/k I know what kind of love this is and it only come once in a lifetime great write
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Re: you made me want to live
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 11:05:54 PM AEST
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Sounds like you've got a nice, loving person in your life! Nice write. One minor suggestion if I may; double check spelling,etc. before you post or let the moderators check for you....
Welcome to YPDC by the way...I look forward to more of your poetry! Scorp. |
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