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Mommy Misses Daddy
Contributed by
Distance
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Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 03:25:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A long time ago I met the most perfect person.
So much like me it was unreal
The Anger
The Pain
The Passion
We were inseparable for so long
And then things decided to change
Without warning
Without us knowing
Without us wanting
We began fighting everyday
As if we were trying to hurt one another intentionally
In reality
I would rather die then to know how much I have hurt him
I never meant to
I thought it was a game
You hurt me I hurt you right back, right?
Now I realized it never was a game it was
Life
Reality
And painful
I would give anything to take those games back
Ill hide them in my soul forever now
Knowing our game is what
Killed
Destroyed
And demolished us
Our love if forever gone and I miss it.
Baby boy
Jellybean
Shaddix
Our son misses his father
As do I
One month, one month old
How do I make it on my own.
Mommy misses Daddy.
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Re: Mommy Misses Daddy
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by heartless_soul on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 03:52:18 PM AEST
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Sorry for you loss, this was a very heartrenching poem to read as it must have been to write, just know that there are others out ther who will love you for who you are and will never let thisd happen. Be strong for your child and for yourself as well, dont give up you have a wounderful gife, your writing can be what helps you through your pain and just know that if you eve need to talk we are all here for you. I loved this poem it made my heart go out for you, I am sorry to tell you this but you might not get too many comments on this, people here dont know how to respond to something like this. looking forword to reading more form you. I will pray for you. Be well
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Re: Mommy Misses Daddy
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by Fears on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 04:26:14 PM AEST
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| this is a very differnt poem that for some as young as me might not understand. My life has kinda been like this so far except I was the one who was a month old...in reality 13. I loved your poem because of the trueness and the emotion. Tuis came from your heart and anything that comes from a persons heart is amazing...Please keep writing! |
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