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In a Word...
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 02:54:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is what's happening around You and Me
Life isn't something you can touch, hear, or see
Life is a cheerful hello and a tearful goodbye
Life is the soul behind your minds eye
Life is but death waiting to happen
Life is what's sucked out of me when my heart starts to blacken
Life is an experience; though frugal and short....
Life is full of mysteries waiting for you to sort
Life is what we breathe into a story or a write
Life is way too short to ponder what it is like!!
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Re: In a Word...
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by heartless_soul on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 03:43:53 PM AEST
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My sentaments exactly, this is a very well writen representation of what life is, your words and structure were well done and (in shcu a short way) you touched all of lifes points, bravo. this could have been posted in insperational poems as well... just a thought. Be well.
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Re: In a Word...
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 05:53:00 PM AEST
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Life is all those those thing. The good, the bad, the ugly. But we have the will to choose which we choose to live with. Life is not perfect, by any means, but it is certainly better than the alternative. I like this, Scorp.
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Re: In a Word...
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:50:49 AM AEST
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Oh i like this. It could be snipped here and there but i think that what makes it a good poem. It has honesty and truth to it which sometimes poetry lacks.
Well done on an excellent poem.
Jane xxx |
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Re: In a Word...
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:13:20 AM AEST
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Wow a great message to one and all. You said it all
Superb
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: In a Word...
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:02:31 PM AEST
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wow.. This was really good. A clear message to all.. great job.. i really like your poems they are very well written and really express raw emotions..
christina |
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Re: In a Word...
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:55:55 PM AEST
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| I agree and you are area great writer! |
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Re: In a Word...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 01:19:17 AM AEST
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| Quite often I find myself asking that same ol' cliche' of a question, "What is life?" and find myself pondering answers. I simply adore your answer here. Wonderfully expressed and wonderfully written. Thank you for the advice. Thank you for being a great poet. Thank you for being you. |
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