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Consequences
Contributed by
Live2Die
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Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 01:21:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A threat to harm ones self,
A hand slammed into a wall
A hysteric group of people.
I love you.
Bleeding cuts,
Swelling knuckles,
Streaming eyes.
I love you.
No, don’t, it’ll kill me.
Please, stop that now…
Oh god my head is swimming.
I love you.
No more then one,
We’ll cut a deal,
No don’t take it!
I love you.
No, please, none at all
Stop it now!
Fine I give up!
I love you.
Here we’ll make this deal,
Wait please! Suggestion…
Let me hear.
I love you.
No more cuts, for 6 months.
Don’t break your hand
Yes! That’s what I want to hear!
I love you…
Copyright ©
Live2Die
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Re: Consequences
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by poet70 on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 01:40:36 PM AEST
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| WOW. aawesome writing, great poem, sorry that this really happened tho, Tammi |
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Re: Consequences
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by Evilnn on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 02:41:13 PM AEST
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Great Write!!
So sorry this happened and I hope all is well now.
Please take care U!!
Eve
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Re: Consequences
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 05:06:47 AM AEST
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| This is an extraordinary piece. GREAT WORK. |
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Re: Consequences
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:31:01 PM AEST
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Great! Great poem! Strong emotions, and good flow.
Sorry, this happened, but i guess the results are good... |
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Re: Consequences
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by bttrflynajar on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:46:35 PM AEST
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| i swear to God we run on the same emotions... i see so much here and know exactly what its about.. this poem made me cry |
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Re: Consequences
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 04:32:44 PM AEST
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Definitely is over flowing with emotion, I love the repetition. Amazing write.
-Cassy |
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Re: Consequences
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 11:20:25 PM AEST
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| A good write and how confusing it can be when love reaches out with a fist that insists it loves you. Very powerful thoughts. |
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