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I Woke Up
Contributed by
DanishPoet
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Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 03:59:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I feel you being with me.
For the first time, I feel love returned.
Now we have something together,
Now I know peace, I've finally learned.
I stand and look at you.
I stare into your eyes.
You take a look at me,
No longer we hide behind lies.
I lean foward to meet you,
a kiss, beautyful lovefilled - lip's rest.
At that single moment,
my heart could barely be within my chest.
Then I woke up,
I knew it was only a dream.
My heart could barely take it,
And I suddenly started to scream...
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2005-05-20 03:59:28]
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Re: I Woke Up
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by somedaylove on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 07:12:54 AM AEST
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wow makes one wish they could stay in their dreams forever..........nice write keep it up
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Re: I Woke Up
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by bethie on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 09:10:58 AM AEST
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| Beauty is found in the little things; that's why it's so hard to find. Touching poem. |
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Re: I Woke Up
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by Sahara on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 09:41:19 AM AEST
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Very Beautiful... Your words are very true, good write, well written
Sonya |
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