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Boilermaker
Contributed by
xnoybis
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:54:03 PM in AEST
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Compound and retract
Accordion of madness
Providing stale air
For tainted concoctions to breath
Tossing and dashing
Inventing new spices
Mixing with fevered paces
Sharing tastes with the floor
Bubbling and boiling
And mincing the meat
Holding back helpings
For uninvited inventeds
Kneading and turning
And pressures applied
Cooked over flames
And chilled under ice
Shaping and forming
With freedom of flow
Divying up portions
That both choke and starve
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xnoybis
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2005-05-19 23:54:03]
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Re: Boilermaker
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by Steel on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 07:43:10 AM AEST
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I like it, but what is "inventeds"?
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Re: Boilermaker
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 10:56:24 AM AEST
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This was an interesting read, with an apparent hidden agenda. It gave off some good imagery with your use of wording, and the title drew me in...It used to be a favourite drink of mine:P
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