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Still here
Contributed by
Jen54
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:37:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm still here
not knowing what to say
feeling the emptiness
breathing in the pain
i know your there
ready to scream my hope away
I'm whispering words of sainity
wishing you would stop
I'm trapped in here
this eternal hell
dreaming of what will never be
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Jen54
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2005-05-19 23:37:18]
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Re: Still here
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:47:09 PM AEST
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Well, personally, I really like it. I can relate to these emotions/feelings and feel I have been there too. Sometimes someone else can express your own similar feelings that you are having in a similar situation and I feel you have done that here. I especially like " i know your there
ready to scream my hope away". I've been there. Thank you.
Nice write |
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Re: Still here
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by somedaylove on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 01:45:12 AM AEST
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| i felt your words nice write...........keep it up |
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Re: Still here
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 05:58:41 AM AEST
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| i felt it... good write.. tasha |
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Re: Still here
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by venkat on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 07:12:36 AM AEST
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| you have expressed your feelings very well. venkat |
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Re: Still here
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 07:47:08 AM AEST
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| Very strong write that was full of emotions. I'm glad you shared it and encourage you to continue the good work. |
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