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Your smile
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:30:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Down and depressed
Making you smile is what I like best
Seeing you blush is a job well done
Scoring points with you
Raising my chances
Craving you smile
Craving to hear your laugh
Your smile pulls me in
To make you smile brightens my day
When you smile’s for someone else
I just want to frown
Dive in the lake and drown
I get depressed when your not smiling
But can’t wait till the day I see you smile for the first time
Holding you in my arms
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2005-05-19 23:30:42]
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Re: Your smile
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:40:29 PM AEST
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| I like this poem and can relate to it. Have had many a day with the same thoughts about someone. Nice write; short, simple, & sweet. |
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Re: Your smile
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by somedaylove on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 01:48:54 AM AEST
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| sigh i felt it too..........very nice write keep it up |
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Re: Your smile
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by Sahara on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 09:52:12 AM AEST
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very sweet I think a lot of us have been there
Sonya |
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