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Pondering Splinters
Contributed by
xnoybis
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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To brave the gauntlet
First you must enter
Stop whittling Time
And pondering splinters
The first step is heavy
The second not light
You wither already
Caving to the fight
Things came so easy
Before, at some time
That time is not now
Right here, in my prime
Traces show ends
You bend and connect
Extracting false leads
From what you inspect
So clever at times
Gift turning to crutch
Wobbling and falling
Desperation to clutch
Prop yourself silent
And exude what you've lost
I'll make it better
Envelope you in frost
Freeze and suspend
My words fall like rocks
You think you force my hand
When I move like a fox
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xnoybis
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2005-05-19 23:26:20]
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Re: Pondering Splinters
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:28:41 PM AEST
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Wow.
I think I just ruptured a coronary vessel.
This is…wow.
I love it!
Ok…feedback:
“Pondering splinters”
The notion itself is perplexing.
Your flow –impeccable!
My favourite stanza:
“Traces show ends
You bend and connect
Extracting false leads
From what you inspect”
Though provoking.
And the last stanza…is mind altering.
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Re: Pondering Splinters
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by Kimmie_mac on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 10:39:15 PM AEST
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great poem it takes you there; keep on keeping on LOL
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