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A NEW CREED
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:59:54 PM in AEST
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When I fell in
the way of sin,
I shook the Heaven's High..
I had no time for peace within,
as saddness thundered by.
But now I sing
on a calmer wing
and hopes and dreams abound!
I write away forbidden things
whenever they come around.
My heart n' soul's
about to bloom,
for peace is here TODAY-
And gone's the glory of all my gloom...
sadness fades away
My thirst of passion hath been deep
as deep as ocean depths;
and never did,
but now I sleep
to drink the ocean's crest.
But dreams of those who dream as I
may bring things to atone,
to break upon my love's release
by words so aptly shown
A man who lets the time fly by
will roll the words along-
and keep until the day he dies
within his deep and steadfast eyes..
my glory of gray and gloomy skies
and write until they're gone.
B
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Re: A NEW CREED
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:13:36 PM AEST
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Congratulations, my friend. You learned the secret. Write it all out. No matter how harsh, macabre, sad, lonely that it sounds, it is your inner pain and writing for some can release it to be dealt with. This is a great thing to tell others to help them deal. That and always knowing you have friends to fall back on when needed. You will always find them here. I did in my time of need.
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Re: A NEW CREED
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:24:04 PM AEST
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much thx Dove...
M.O.H. |
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Re: A NEW CREED
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:46:17 PM AEST
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Billy what an extraordinary write. I felt the power and strength behind every verse. A true master piece with rays of hope in it. I love your work Billy cos u put ur heart into and express it so well. We're here for u in the good times and the bad my dear friend.
A poem written with hope and perfection. 5 big stars from me my dear friend.
*hugs*
~sue~
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Re: A NEW CREED
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 01:14:16 AM AEST
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ty so very much..
"a poem within itself"..
M.O.H.
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Re: A NEW CREED
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by venkat on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 06:07:37 AM AEST
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| really a very good write..I agree with Rita's comment.s.. venkat |
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Re: A NEW CREED
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 08:14:16 AM AEST
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Definately a work of poetic artistry, nice write
u have a vintage style . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: A NEW CREED
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by Dralion on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 10:23:08 AM AEST
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Wonderful.
This is a poem for anyone who struggles with addiction, or any other issue.
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Re: A NEW CREED
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:49:32 PM AEST
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Wow this is deep, wide, strong, wise,tall masterpeice. Luv it.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: A NEW CREED
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 03:18:50 PM AEST
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My dearest heart ~
I need only quote this, darling ..
"My heart n' soul's
about to bloom,
for peace is here TODAY-"
for you to see all that you've created and accomplished is
as good and pure as solid silver !!
The writes I read where you pour out your heart and soul are the ones
in which I feel closest to you .. (especially during the trying moments),
and have faith that all things great shall come .. in time ~
Your heart, your mind .. your very soul are the most beautiful and
exceptional treasures to ever have touched me. I am, quite simply
amazed, each and every time I visit your pages .. and always
leave with so much more than I could have imagined. I adore the
way your mind works .. and I am inherently drawn to your words
(as I am, always, to you~) right from the very first ..
There is much pride in this write. Your audacity; your truth;
your faith and lack of ostentatious air are, as always, a gift and
a beauty to behold. I love you~
~Breezy
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