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Danger To Society
Contributed by
Live2Die
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:22:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Run and hide
Far from me
I'm a danger to
Society.
Each smile given,
Each tear cried
Is one more plague,
One more 4 year old eyed.
Every step taken,
Every movement made
Is one more death,
One more killed by a blade.
So run and hide,
Far from me,
For I’m a danger to
Society.
Copyright ©
Live2Die
... [
2005-05-19 22:22:38]
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Re: Danger To Society
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:03:55 AM AEST
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I liked it a lot.
It kinda hit me hard.
Keep it up!!! |
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Re: Danger To Society
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by kydistortion69 on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 09:45:21 PM AEST
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| I like this poem ..very intense and dark.. |
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Re: Danger To Society
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by girltranscended on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:39:08 PM AEST
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| It was smart of you to start and end with the stanzas you chose because they are the best lines here. I can imagine a very different rewrite of this by changing out the middle two stanzas. ? But, I did like this! very much. |
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