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Wait
Contributed by
Lauren
on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Behind each bush, each tree, each brook
They await you
Hand and foot
You crawl across the grassy plains
Crouching, prowling
Moving over dark terrain
You're brave and fierce
As dark and night
Your will, your strength
Put up the fight
As the thunder hits the sky
Death confronts you
Eye to eye
Instead of running
Head and Tail
You stick it out
And do not bail
Your victor has come
The Union is one
The days deaths are done
Copyright ©
Lauren
... [
2002-12-31 03:00:00]
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Re: Wait
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 05:41:10 AM AEST
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Beautifully written.' Your will, your strength put up the fight as the thunder hits the sky ' a very good flow-
- I enjoyed your way of writing.... Venkat |
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Re: Wait
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 04:02:54 PM AEST
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| hey again lol. lauren see now you can see what people think about your poems. i told you that they are good and all. u never listen. lol. i love you. love me |
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Re: Wait
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by jsringo on
Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 05:34:17 PM AEST
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| War is hell and you have done very well to convey that. |
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