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My lips are sealed
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:47:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I wouldn't say that we've driften apart
I wouldn't say that you've broken my heart
I wouldn't say that I'm less than amused
I wouldn't say that you're young and confused
I wouldn't say that you've lighten a fire
I wouldn't say that you're becoming a liar
I wouldn't say that you're the reason I cry
I wouldn't say that I'm afriad you could die
I wouldn't say that I don't want you to bend
I wouldn't say that you're my closest friend
Some things just don't need to be said...
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Jane_Doe
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2005-05-19 20:47:06]
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Re: My lips are sealed
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by taybaxter on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:55:07 PM AEST
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| Nice repetition, creates good effect. |
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Re: My lips are sealed
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 09:06:13 PM AEST
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Jane_Doe
I agree--not your best
But you got your feelings and frustration out and that is good.
I hope your friend finds happiness and you have peace of mind.
Thank God we can express ourseves on sites lie this.
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Re: My lips are sealed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:02:42 AM AEST
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| I like it. Say it anyway and get it out! |
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Re: My lips are sealed
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by Sahara on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 04:54:04 PM AEST
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I liked it... you did get you're feelings out... you might be on the right track - who knows maybe tell your friend next?
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