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Rebel Rebel
Contributed by
Greenlee
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:24:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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carelessly chewing
our youth you have ruined
silly boy.
because our minds are wasting
on the secrets you are keeping
and the words you never say but
i know.
doe eyes
you look so surprised
you look like you're waiting
to see what i see
read what i write
and stare at how i feel.
Copyright ©
Greenlee
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2005-05-19 20:24:35]
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Re: Rebel Rebel
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by mylady on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:01:49 AM AEST
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| kids ! nice poem.. |
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Re: Rebel Rebel
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by Wilder on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 04:40:54 PM AEST
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I get the feeling this song is about a brother, perhaps?
A good poem :o) |
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Re: Rebel Rebel
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 04:17:50 PM AEST
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Interesting. I like the style used here, and the line breaks felt especially, right. Keep it up!
Andrew |
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