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All That Is, That Is'nt
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I wash my pure hands in tainted blood
Acid rain, baths my body
But you give me love
I waste the bright days and the dark nights
Saturating in pain, as I grow old
But you give me life
I rot in everything that is nothing and naught
Marred of blame, the only thing I am
But you are there everytime I am distraught
I am held in contempt by the sweet and sour demise of me
Knowing everything is to change, in the end
But you still are there loving me endlessly
. . .
As my life starts to fade away
I notice the dying flame, that burns free
The only thing I can say is
. . .
I love you
. . .
As death overcomes me
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-05-19 20:07:43]
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Re: All That Is, That Is'nt
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 09:20:43 PM AEST
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| what an ending. it was amazing. very well put. if this poem has meaning in it, other than what i can see, than you will have to tell me tomorrow, because there simply is not time to see it now or hear of it. i think that this poem is very well written, but i would have liked a rhyme for the middle line every now and then, yet this rhyme format worked out fine as it is. i just like rhymes too much....::tries to restrain self:: you may wash what was on your hands, but you cannot wash it off your concious. |
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Re: All That Is, That Is'nt
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:55:31 PM AEST
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A thought provoking piece of poetry my dear friend. Like Jen said I too feel there is alot more behind the lines. Your skilled ability in writing is remarkable. A very talented poet u r Clark. Always a pleasure to read ur brillant work.
*hugs*
~sue~
5 stars from me |
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Re: All That Is, That Is'nt
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 01:27:05 AM AEST
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woah!!!! this is a wicked poem.....wow outstanding i love ur poetry!!!! this is sweetly dark......
u are a promising writer keep it up!!!
*****5 stars!!! |
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