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Dreams
Contributed by
Agaryulnaer
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:00:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Dreams are my worst nightmare
The darkness it’s telling me no one cares
Tossing and turning
My stomach churning
Circling me faster and faster
They are all like my master
My eyes closed tight
Then I see some light
I wake up
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2005-05-19 20:00:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by Quilted_rag_doll on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:24:15 PM AEST (User
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Tossing and turning
My stomach churning
overall it's okays...it doesn't flow too well...but still some good lines...
Auryn |
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