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My Life to Death Transistion. My Life is Done!

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 07:05:54 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



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The True meaning of this series, is showing how you can end one life to start a new one. If people would only take the time to ask. Ask that person how they are doing, show compassion. Help them see they are loved and they will show you how they truly can love... I hope you all enjoyed the 4 part series. MaJ


I am alone in the world
And you pass by me as if I am not here
Another person on a park bench
And all you do is stare

I want to kill myself
I want to die
I can not take this world anymore
No matter how much I try.

Dont you see me? Will you save me?
I am not a figment of your imagination
I am silent becaue you cant hear me
Dont let me go through this separation

Notice I am crying out for help
But it falls on deaf ears
I dont want to be this way
Stuck I am hiding from your fears

It is by the fears of man
That I am outcasted by you
You see me from the outside view
Look inside and you will see what is true

come on and save me from myself
all i need is your kind of help
i can’t get it from nobody else
come on and save me

I've lost my way
You’re nowhere in sight
I'll put my faith in you
Dont let me down, I cant take that again

Now i’m all alone
I don’t know what to do
Everything seems so empty
Now that i’m without anyone

I am ashamed of my thoughts
I wish you could see
When I lost the will to live
The will also lost me

come on and save me from myself
all i need is your kind of help
i can’t get it from nobody else
come on and save me

I wish you could have saved me from myself
All i needed was your kind of help
I couldn’t get it from nobody else

Ask me what is wrong, dont think I like to be alone
Ask me if you can help, Dont think I can do it on my own
The world views me as a lost cause, a child ungrown
Take me to my safe place, take me to my home

I really dont want to die,
Cant you see my tears are now dry
My heart beats silently with every moment that passes by
I just want one person to make this attempt and to try

Love me, Want me, Need Me, I need to be looked at
I want someone to hold me tight when I am down
Dont pass me by, Save me from myself before I die
When you see me, dont look away and at the ground.

Be the one person to open up to me
Be the one that asks me to open up to you
No one truly knows what good I can do
Tell me you love me, so I can tell you I also love you.

I die a little more each day
This forced separation
Addiction
Regression

Suspended animation
My life to death Transistion!
Help me end the old life. This new life is my New Conviction!




Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-05-19 19:05:54]
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Re: My Life to Death Transistion. My Life is Done! (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:37:59 PM AEST
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I didn't read the other parts but I enjoyed this.
You captured the emotions well... emotions
that I can relate to. Just telling your friends
that you are available if they need to talk is
helpful I think. Thanks for sharing this I hope
someone will read this and see that life is
worth living.

Bobo (Joel)




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