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The End Effect
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 06:03:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Nothing else to do
i'm leaving now
my time with you
here is done
i'm through
I love you now
i'll love you when
i'm gone, after this
is finished, your voice
has softened and departed
Sleep will bring your face,
smile, the good times, my
mind will ponder and retrace
My smile will mask my pain,
i'll wipe and cover my tears,
remember the moments, your
stare, all that was, the feelings once shared
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
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2005-05-19 18:03:44]
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Re: The End Effect
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 06:55:53 PM AEST
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sweetoccation29
Short n sad n sweet
I know the feelings
A love walked out on me
Unwanting I hit the street
"We'll both be happier"
Years of depression overcame
I wished it never were
Once you love you never forget
Pieces of happiness are tangled
intermingled within a heart
I liked this poem
Old memories again came home
Dennis---Sinned
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Re: The End Effect
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:02:31 AM AEST
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So much said in so little words. A sad and emotional write. You've expressed urself really well. I'm so sorry 4 ur pain.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: The End Effect
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 03:57:30 PM AEST
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This is beautiful yet so sad and heart warming tears u have placed in my heart, u r
a magnificent poet . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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