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What Is Young?
Contributed by
janie
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 04:11:15 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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In ages I am young
Yet that isn't how I feel
My soul has lived through many centuries
I know of the world's secrets
Already I can see beyond outside layers
Already I can see into a person's heart
Already I can analyze things to a deep state
I have felt true feelings
True anger
True sorrow
True pain
True happiness
I have been in love
Love as real as ever love was
So I say that being young is just a number
And in actuality, I have it all
I have great wisdom and many years ahead of me all at once
I'm not truly young
But i'll enjoy this youthful number while it lasts
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janie
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2005-05-19 16:11:15]
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Re: What Is Young?
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 04:20:13 PM AEST
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| vey creative,original and true. i agree 100% and i love the wording you used, simple but packed with emotion. great job. |
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Re: What Is Young?
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by Fears on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 07:26:40 PM AEST
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very original! Get job and I loved the way that you pieced evey thing together...
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