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Keep In touch............!!!
Contributed by
Anu
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 04:09:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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We met here for our graduations ;
but it feels like we are kindergarten friends.
The love,the care,the honour,the affection;
Our relationship has all these blends...!!
We all had Pride,ego,arrogance and fights;
But still we couldnt resist to mend..!!
Our pretty suits,your smart shirts;
In our campus has set a trend..!!
The PMC,the LOC,the rockgarden,the khamgaon Gate;
All these strolling places will be lost..!!
The cherishable memories,the sweetest existence;
The lovely talks,the fun,the adventure,all these compete no cost !!
The Valentine's Day,Teacher's Day,Friendship Day,Rose Day;
Will be missed by us everyday........!!
Frenz with a heart full of memories and eyes full of tears..
Its time to depart from our dears........!!
But a departure always Welcomes an arrival..
And an arrival of a good future,a gr8 life...
which means something in itself...
So Frenz...plz keep in touch..!!!!
Copyright ©
Anu
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Re: Keep In touch............!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 05:01:26 PM AEST (User
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Sounds like great friendships. A note of critique, you might try shorter lines, as they often flow better, but 'tis up to you. Poetry wouldn't be what it is if we didn't have our own styles. Keep it up!
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