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Love Ridden
Contributed by
Blu
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 01:26:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The music has stopped
nothing stirs
except your memory
but you're not gone yet
I know
too well
what she has for you
and you ask me still
to believe in love
and kiss my weary tears
the distance between our bodies
has grown
even though
you still sleep next to me
your warm can only make me colder
when it's over
and I can't afford to die anymore
so leave me here
let me close-
leave the lights off
and the paper blank
because I'll fill it
but you won't like it
and yes, he'll read it
because he does that now
when you never would
how many times was I your muse?
tell the truth
none
but how many times
was I used
just to get you off?
so here's your chance
to run and hide
because hell don't know my fury
and here's my advice
a pill for you to swallow
I'm not love ridden
anymore.
Copyright ©
Blu
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2005-05-19 13:26:04]
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Re: Love Ridden
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kayan on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:37:45 PM AEST
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Wow, I have to admit that I've read most of your work and always enjoy it. But I've never come across something of yours that's so angry. I love it, beautifully written. I especially like the line "so here's your chance to run and hide because hell don't know my fury".
A change from the norm, I applaud.
Peace and Love,
Kayan |
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Re: Love Ridden
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by waos on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:45:17 PM AEST
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This was good. I really feel like I relate to it right now. Relationships
begin to fade long before they end. And you may know it, but not
admit it. You did a good job putting emotion into this and I know I
want to read it again and again.
~Kara |
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Re: Love Ridden
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 07:37:36 AM AEST
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| A very strong poem, my hat goes off to this one. All the emotions are wrapped carefully in well chosen words. Keep up the good writing! |
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