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My Suicide
Contributed by
bloodytears5
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 01:20:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As i walked down the hall
I felt the blade in my pocket
I wanted my death to make a bang
Something everyone would remember
So all the students would know
that what they did and said
did make me sick in the head
just sit on the flood
next to the toliet
lift up the sleeves
reveal my scars, my past, my fears
start from the top
Go straight down
make it deep and dont make a sound
it all gushes out all at once
as i feel the tingle and i start to run dry
i knew that this was the perfect suicide
Everyone would see, everyone would know
That this isnt just for a show
So my suicide did make a bang
as my blood dripped out
while everyone said my name.
Copyright ©
bloodytears5
... [
2005-05-19 13:20:25]
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Re: My Suicide
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by Lucinda on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:41:23 PM AEST
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| Wow! A truly amazing poem and it has a huge impact! It reminds me alot of the song called 'Nothing to lose' by Billy Talent! It really made me think about things for a while! I love it u should deffo write poems more often! |
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Re: My Suicide
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by Anu on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 03:35:24 PM AEST
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| Hey dat was gud....but never do dat...we need gud poets like u.. ;) keep it up buddy!! |
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Re: My Suicide
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:50:02 AM AEST
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amazing poem. I loved it mostly cuz i am also sick in the head and anything with blood, killing and death gets my attetion and full respect. great poem.
christina |
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Re: My Suicide
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by crazygirl on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:04:20 PM AEST
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| this is just wow! it makes my heart skip beats when i read it. its got alot of feeling in it, but just the right about. its really dramatic, and i just totally love it. definately one of my faves |
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