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My wish
Contributed by
Lucinda
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:47:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I die my wish to you
Would be to make this wish come true
My wish to you and keep it true
Is that you will love me through and through!
Copyright ©
Lucinda
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2005-05-19 11:47:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My wish
(User Rating: 1 ) by doug on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:30:53 PM AEST (User
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Are you a hallmark writer? Because that was as good or better as any I've ever read from them. Short and odd perhaps but quite lovely to read , truly , doug |
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Re: My wish
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lucinda on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:31:45 PM AEST (User
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Thank u muchly doug!....nope, heh im not atall! Im just plain ol' me, to be honest i dont know the first thing about poetry and this was just a crack at something ive never done much of before. |
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Re: My wish
(User Rating: 1 ) by bluebird on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 03:36:17 AM AEST (User
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i agree this belongs on a card.
id defiantely buy it.
great write
keep the faith
bec |
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