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The dust on me settles
Contributed by
In_a_while
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:33:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the jokes are all done, laughter's no fun
my calm is before the cold storm
i'm trying to be fine, like all the fine wine
but grapes can't keep us all warm
why can't i love, like the sun does the dove
your dust on me settles too soon
i stay to be used, through the days i've cruised
to the end of my last afternoon
i won't blink through lies, cause i tape up my eyes
to see what's inside of your soul
i break both my legs, so don't take dead eggs
my comfort's the floor of my hole
now as i see, a dawn chasing me
i wait in the bushes to pray
my gun is too full, i need room to pull
away from today i will stay...
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Re: The dust on me settles
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by doug on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:39:34 PM AEST
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I've not yet read a poem here today which has equaled this and I have read many.
This is all I can think to say , truly , doug |
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Re: The dust on me settles
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 01:57:18 PM AEST
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| Just like yourself to write with so much hate and pain in another great write. I love the way you paint a picture in your writes that truly draw the reader in. Great work this piece really took over my mind as I read the words. You have talent my friend and your words are much enjoyed always. Take care and keep up these great works of art….Steve |
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