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In The Eyes of my Father
Contributed by
Rogue
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:25:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In the eyes of my father
I see a girl that could never be
I see a girl who isn't happy
I see a girl who sees me
In the eyes of my father
I breathe destruction
A girl who creates choas
and who's mind could never function
In the eyes of my father
I see a love that is dismissed
A love that always fails
and a love I'll never miss
In the eyes of my father
I see something that isn't fair
"No love from my daddy cuz the courage isn't here
When he pass away I bet I won't cry
Cuz my anger would never let me feel for a stranger"
In the eyes of my father
I see a curse
"I get my eyes from him"
and that only makes me worse
In the eyes of my father
I see a soul
It's black as cold
and to me would never unfold
In the eyes of my father
I see a broken heart
I see my mother standing
And a divorce in the start
In the eyes of my father
I see my brother Cory
the one who took care of me
but tells a different story
In the eyes of my father
I see my sister NeNe
The one who set my flame
and from her passion I gained
In the eyes of my father
I see my brother Derrick
The one that he corrupted
but also is the most caring
In the eyes of my father
I see a girl that could never be
I see a girl who isn't happy
I see a girl who sees me
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Re: In The Eyes of my Father
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by Fears on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 09:24:18 AM AEST
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| wow, that was really good and filled with emotion/hatred/love and many more emotional feelings. Good write...so keep it up! |
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Re: In The Eyes of my Father
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by blue_angel on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:35:49 AM AEST
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wow that is such a powerful poem. very well written with feeling and emotion. brilliant.
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: In The Eyes of my Father
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by SPSM on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:54:18 AM AEST
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| Your poem is very emotional, at least it brought tears to my eyes. I'm sorry life dealt you a card that you just can't win with, but don't throw in your hand until the last man falls. Who knows what's ahead for you? |
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Re: In The Eyes of my Father
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 10:03:49 PM AEST
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Rogue
Teriffic writting
Heart breaking
sad
love felt
love lost
bitterness
pain
beaten down
worthless feelings
Your key to happiness is
forgiveness and letting go
Hatred hurts the hater the most
LOVE those who hold you dear
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