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Brothers
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:10:03 AM in AEST
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When we were young together...
I never will forget
Columbia, the schoolyard
in childhood where we met
Our humble homes and dearest times,
their sorrow and there joys
are awakened to the grand sublime
from when you and I were boys.
And as we grew
though not together,
some friends we had before
like leaves of autumn weather
are gone forever more
How blest we were to age alike
thought time our life destroys
and takes our memories
from here to Heaven
from when you and I were boys.
M.O.H.
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Man_On_High
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2005-05-19 00:10:03]
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Re: Brothers
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:37:11 AM AEST
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| very interesting write remember the monory lane.good write. |
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Re: Brothers
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:38:07 AM AEST
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Billy so beautifully written with the reminders of our youthly friendships. Nicely written and conveyed. Keep up the great work.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Brothers
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:03:46 PM AEST
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Very touching boy could i relate 2 this . . .
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Re: Brothers
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by TheVoice on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:12:11 PM AEST
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Very good piece here. I enjoyed this.
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Re: Brothers
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 02:13:05 AM AEST
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Awww what a nice tribute to The Wiz!!! How lucky of you both to have made such a positive impact on each others lives...This is a wonderful write, and I greatly enjoyed reading it. Nice job Billy!
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