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Hiding In The Clouds
Contributed by
the_callif
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:23:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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While I hide my face within the clouds
From the firey gaze of people and god
If a cloud can block out sunlight
Then it can act as a facade
But clouds are naught but air and rain
They taunt me with the promise of cover
But I know that if I were to sit upon one
Down, very slowly, I would hover
Then I would be back to where I started
To the world from which I was hiding
With no hiding place for example, a cloud
To live a life that is abiding
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2005-05-18 23:23:49]
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Re: Hiding In The Clouds
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:39:54 PM AEST
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great write..
I like your usage
of the word "naught"
very cool
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Re: Hiding In The Clouds
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 05:29:00 AM AEST
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| He's right a good write, and I also appreciated the use of the word "naught" |
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