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To Dream Until Eternity
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:09:21 PM in AEST
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No longer do I love [alone]
for now I've given my heart loan.
The largest demons have left me be--
Oh! if only for eternity!
The dream of me that I live
is of people who will forgive
and hope and peace that blow through meadows--
(While I myself dwell in shadows)--
too soon expire
so I am destroyed in reality's fire.
But only when my sleep disrupts
by missing things my mind corrupts
will this damning torture
be my looming future.
Till then, think not of the folly that be--
think only of a sleepy melody.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
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2005-05-18 21:09:21]
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Re: To Dream Until Eternity
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by doug on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:56:59 PM AEST
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| A young age , I think , does not take away from this poem. You have given yourself to little credit but I will give to you what you have denied yourself. This is a great poem for any age. Rarely do I bother to read one twice yet I did on this one. truly , doug |
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Re: To Dream Until Eternity
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by Fears on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:28:38 PM AEST
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very well written, ( cummon, you gotta give us younger one some credit, we work our asses off in math class-too bad we aint doin it )
I liked your poem and i think that you did i good job. It flowed. Keep writing in math class because it seems to b working 4 u! |
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