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Dear Mommy
Contributed by
cocacola1331
on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:42:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Dear Mommy;
Today was such a good day
so much better than others
The sun was shining so
high and bright
And I smiled and laughed
I didn't cry once,
making it through the day
I'm exactly who you'od want me to be now
My own unique person
You'd be so proud
if you saw me now
because I'm
so strong
Just like you taught me
It's days like this
where I don't realize anything is wrong
Where the dark clouds
have been pushed aside
But Mommy,
I can still see the clouds
hanging there in the
corners of my eyes
Why are they there, Mommy?
Why do I feel this way?
All I know is that you've
been away for a while
Last time I saw you,
there you were
sleeping in that red, wooden box
Looking so cold and so tired
People were crying,
all dressed in black
Why were they crying, Mommy?
I remember someone
begging you to wake up
She clutched your hand
and cried and cried
until her eyes turned
fire red
But Mommy, you wouldn't
listen to her
you kept on sleeping
I don't understand, Mommy,
Why were they crying?
All I know is that
I miss you, Mommy
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2005-05-18 20:42:31]
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Re: Dear Mommy
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by Keila on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:55:53 PM AEST
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| T.T *sniffles* that is a good write made me cry, i lost a friend not to long ago so i know how that is |
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Re: Dear Mommy
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by Fears on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:05:17 AM AEST
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a very deep and emotional write! good job and if I wernt sitting in my school chair right now i would be crying my eyes out. very good idea to write in a childs POV!
Keep Writing!
~Fears~~ |
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Re: Dear Mommy
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by SPSM on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:50:20 PM AEST
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| How hauntingly beautiful this is. You should go read Shey "What i miss most since mom died" poem. It did happen to her, but as a teenager. Loved your write. |
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