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Brave Samurai Knight - A Japanese Choka
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
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Brave Samurai Knight
your Warlord, Itso, waits you.
Your ancestors cry
out for revenge against Mau.
Defend your family's
honor for all weep at what
Mau has done to our
land making us his servants.
Take your sword now knight
and avenge your father' name.
Your grandfather waits
in his grave to see you fight
and restore his house
to its former place of pride.
Itso waits for you.
Knight, this thing you need to do!
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ramfire
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2002-12-31 01:20:00]
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Re: Brave Samurai Knight - A Japanese Choka
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 06:03:41 PM AEST
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interesting write
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Re: Brave Samurai Knight - A Japanese Choka
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 12:08:30 PM AEST
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Thank you for reading my humble poem.
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Ramfire |
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Re: Brave Samurai Knight - A Japanese Choka
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 10:04:03 AM AEST
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| we liked that so much my wife is going to print it out and frame it. |
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Re: Brave Samurai Knight - A Japanese Choka
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 10:34:45 AM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words. I hope I can write something else you'll like.
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Ramfire |
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Re: Brave Samurai Knight - A Japanese Choka
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 03:15:23 AM AEST
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Interesting write. Who are the characters up there? Are they symbols, personifications or actual people?
Anyway...feel free to look at the final 2 poems I'll be posting soon...after tomorrow, I won't be adding anymore, but just passing through to review my works. |
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