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To You, Dad
Contributed by
Moshi_Moshi
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:31:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You never really cared
You just wanted to ***** mom and leave her there
That's exactly what you did
You just never thought you'd get a kid
Well I'm here
I'm the screw up you feared
I don't see you alot
But that's alright because I don't need what you've got
You've got a different family
You all seem to live so happily
But me and mom were first
To love you at your worst
Now all you do is order me around
I guess your love for me was never found
Is that why you left a month after I was born
To date other girls and watch porn
Yeah you sent a check ever month to pay the bills
But that doesn't mean mom's wallet was filled
She didn't marry you for your money
She married you because you were nice and funny
She just wanted somebody to hold
But all thats changed now because you're hateful and cold
You don't like mom and you don't like me
So I guess you'll never see
Me and mom are more than you could ever ask for
But you still don't love us just like before
So here is a poem to you dad
About the father I wish I never had
Copyright ©
Moshi_Moshi
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2005-05-18 20:31:27]
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Re: To You, Dad
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by emokid on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:46:50 PM AEST
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you did a great job of capturing the emotion of child with a worthless father great job
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Re: To You, Dad
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by Keila on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:52:25 PM AEST
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| o.O wow that is a great emotional write |
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Re: To You, Dad
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:55:04 PM AEST
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| You explained exactly how I felt while writing To My Step-Mother, Moshi-Chan. I think you expressed it so much better then I did, though. Great job, Moshi. |
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Re: To You, Dad
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 06:28:15 AM AEST
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Very good write - ripe with emotion... brought tears to my eyes. I think you've summed up what a lot of people feel about their father's.
Sonya |
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Re: To You, Dad
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by Fears on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:18:54 PM AEST
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that is a very good poem. Started with emotion and ended with it too. Keep on writing and i like how you ended it...So here is a poem to you dad
About the father I wish I never had
~Fears~
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Re: To You, Dad
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by adanawa on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:13:43 PM AEST
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I like this one....my father never left me but I can try to guess how much you hate him.....I know what it is like to hate your father...mine tryed to walk out....keep writing you are very good at it.
Till then
octavia |
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Re: To You, Dad
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by Dorkfish on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:13:05 PM AEST
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| Very good job!!!! Filled with emotion and rage, I love it! I'm very sorry you have such a crappy dad! I wish you and your mom much luck in finding someone to take that place and treat you both with love and respect. Atleast you have eachother. Good job on the poem!!! |
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