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One More Kiss
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:53:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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can you kiss me please just one more time
let me feel your heart beat next to mine
i miss the way things used to be
i miss the ways you used to hold me
what i want more than anything
is to have you by my side
for it again to be the two of us
and not just you and i
do i even have a chance
of winning back your heart
if so please tell me what to do
please tell me where to start
it hurts to be away from you
but it hurts to see you too
all these emotions confuse me so
please tell me what to do
so i need to know now
cause my soul is dying
should i just give up
or keep on trying?
Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
Copyright ©
bethers_is_my_baby
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2005-05-18 19:53:33]
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Re: One More Kiss
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by Fears on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:55:22 PM AEST
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| wow..that is really deep and meaning full, I like it alot! |
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Re: One More Kiss
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by emokid on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:33:58 PM AEST
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I write on this a lot and understand it keep writing you're good
Ian the emokid |
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Re: One More Kiss
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:25:33 PM AEST
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| normally i cry when i write not when i read but i'm crying now, these are words i wish i could say to the love i lost.. thank you this was beautiful... good write |
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Re: One More Kiss
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:53:10 AM AEST
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This was very beautiful. It was very meaningful and very well written. great job. I felt emotions stir inside myself.
blessed be
christina |
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Re: One More Kiss
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by somedaylove on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 04:29:17 PM AEST
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| wow amazing i felt your words...............gl time will tell all i wish you the best ..............great write keep it up |
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