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Thoughts
Contributed by
Agaryulnaer
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:25:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Thoughts in my mind making my head spin and twirl
I just want to go to the shadows and curl
Eyes heavy wanting to go to sleep
But I知 afraid that my thoughts I might keep
I知 being laughed at from the other me
It feels so real like stings from a bee
I知 sitting hugging my knees and closing my eyes
I知 trying to forget all these thoughts and lies
Copyright ﾂｩ
Agaryulnaer
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2005-05-18 19:25:31]
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Re: Thoughts
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:38:11 PM AEST
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I知 sitting hugging my knees and closing my eyes
I知 trying to forget all these thoughts and lies.
okays...not bad form, alright on form...i like the 'being launched at from the other me' line...
Auryn
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Re: Thoughts
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by vox on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 05:08:59 PM AEST
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| wow, really dark thoughts u got there. nice job though i like this stuff. |
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