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Invisible
Contributed by
nomad062303
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:23:53 PM in AEST
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Do you see me standing here?
Or are you looking right through me?
Do you see me crying here?
Or is your vision blurry?
Cant you see the look on my face?
Or are you trying to ignor it?
Was everything we had real or a waste?
You couldnt possibly forget it?
Do you see the pain in my heart?
Or do you only see what yours desires?
Do you understand that what you did tore us apart?
Did you feel the pain of the heartbreak burning like fire?
Do you see how I look at you?
Anyone could see that Im so still in love
thats why I act like I dont want to be in love with you
But its hard because its like you my guardian angel from above
I have one more question I need yo ask
Am I really that invisible that you can see right through me?
Or is my face covered by a mask?
Its funny because when I look into the mirror I dont even see me...
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Re: Invisible
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by Fears on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:09:50 PM AEST
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| deep meaningfull and full of emotion! |
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Re: Invisible
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by emokid on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:25:17 PM AEST
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I've been there and it's hard but eventually the pain will fade
Ian the emokid |
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Re: Invisible
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by LongingFor on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 11:59:38 AM AEST
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i love everything in the poem except the last part where u said "its funny becuz wen i look into the mirror i dont even see me.."
Keep writing
~Sasha |
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Re: Invisible
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:39:39 PM AEST
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gr8 job i really liked this part.
Am I really that invisible that you can see right through me?
Or is my face covered by a mask?
Its funny because when I look into the mirror I dont even see me...
'cause many ppl wear a mask to hide who they are inside. they're to afraid to let anyone in...i am one of these ppl but im happy to say that im starting to let ppl in little by little....but i still have a long way to go. great job! |
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