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Never get ahead!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
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Does it ever seem no matter what you do,
you just cant get ahead?
Trying hard just to get through,
But falling on your face instead,
Well this is how I feel,
My husband & I,
this is all to real,
its tough to get by,
You work for money,but little pay,
but where does it all go,
for bills that were due like yesterday,
this is life as we all know,
It never seems we get ahead,
trying more each day,
We should have just stayed in bed,
instead of working all day!
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LOWMAN613
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2002-12-31 00:40:00]
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Re: Never get ahead!
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by Mystery_Girl on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 01:27:33 AM AEST
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| Yeah i agree totally......hasnt the standard of living got so expensive.....i work night duty to be able to make ends meet now......for me and my babies.....eveything just keeps going up and up...........take care :-) |
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Re: Never get ahead!
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 02:32:12 AM AEST
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| Madam ! your poem is a true mirror of many of our lives. But I appreciate your last two lines which are fantastic.Thanks a lot for sharing the feelings Venkat |
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Re: Never get ahead!
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 07:06:33 AM AEST
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| It really stinks to have to pay your way through life now-a-days. It's not right for any of us. Great write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Never get ahead!
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 07:06:05 PM AEST
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| I feeel that way,,all the time that i cant ever get ahead,,but through god I know that i'll be alright,,he haqs never failed me yet,,,thank you my friend,,craig s. meeks |
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Re: Never get ahead!
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by darkmind on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 02:42:12 PM AEST
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| nope cant get ahead either i like this one of yours all the other ones are to happy for me my life doesnt have rainbows glad yours does good poem |
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Re: Never get ahead!
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by OreO on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 02:13:11 AM AEST
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Dang aint' this tha truth....this i think is something that everyone goes through, i'd much rather stay in bed lol....thanks for sharing this one Christina...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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