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Dreams
Contributed by
Fears
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 05:52:56 PM in AEST
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In a heartbeat everything can change
someone lives, someone dies
someone loves, someone cries.
Right now
Im falling.
Falling throught the air,
through the trees,
through the ground,
through the core of the earth.
Im on the other side of the world
now the top, again to the bottom.
Im queen, now I'm dead.
In a heartbeat everything can change.
Copyright ©
Fears
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2005-05-18 17:52:56]
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Re: Dreams
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:06:27 PM AEST
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the message is so true, althou im not so sure as the way u told it. i was fine with it untill
Im queen, now I'm dead.
*~peace~* |
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Re: Dreams
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:59:20 AM AEST
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Poem was great. I liked it. Change is sometimes bad and sometimes good. Message you sent sent was clear and true..
christina |
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Re: Dreams
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by LongingFor on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 11:56:31 AM AEST
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thats definetly true.
gret poem !
but y is it called dreams?
maybe a title like "in a heartbeat" or
"change" would make more sense
Keep writing
~Sasha |
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