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Love's Double-Edged Sword - Double Nonet
Contributed by
Elizabeth_Dandy
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 05:30:00 PM in AEST
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Love
Dear friends
Is so sharp
And keen a blade,-
A double edged sword,
That has power to heal,
But also power to break
With its keen and double-edged sword
To break the human heart yet again
Buried memories break out afresh
That afflict the Spirit and Soul,
As they come to the surface,
And so I would warn you
Of the keen sharp blade
That is part of
Any great
And true
Love
Elizabeth Dandy
Copyright ©
Elizabeth_Dandy
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2005-05-18 17:30:00]
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Re: Love's Double-Edged Sword - Double Nonet
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:31:44 PM AEST
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| this is nice!! very creative!! |
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Re: Love's Double-Edged Sword - Double Nonet
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 05:59:13 PM AEST
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ED this is really a masterpiece. I can't remember what a poem like this called, but I know it is very difficult to create, and you have done and excellent job!
So true are your words, a double edge sword that cuts very deeply, and can be lethal to some.
Love it ED
Can creating that be fun?
Warm love
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Re: Love's Double-Edged Sword - Double Nonet
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by reflections on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 04:47:57 AM AEST
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As usual, you use the beauty of form, and word, to pass on a message of importance - while offering a moment for the mind, and soul, to rest from the regular hectic schedule of living our life.
The power of love, so sharp and keen;
with razor sharpness, cuts between
good memories, and those of distaste,
lest love itself be laid to waste.
John
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