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Harsh Words
Contributed by
jmpy84
on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 05:10:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You hate me don’t you
I never do anything good enough
I never can do anything to your standards
Your put downs are like knives going into my skin
Your harsh words are making my heart bleed
anything you do or say just tears me apart
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2005-05-18 17:10:11]
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Re: Harsh Words
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by Nomad062303 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:06:42 PM AEST
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| nice, but short, i didnt really see a concept in it... keep it up |
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Re: Harsh Words
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:23:52 PM AEST
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Who needs concept?
Very good writing. To me writing is apersons own thoughts recorded to share with other.
Good writing so please keep it up.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Harsh Words
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by Freda_Burrel on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:08:15 AM AEST
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| good write ... does hit home with some people.. |
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Re: Harsh Words
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 04:11:05 PM AEST
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Hey who needs concept?
This is wonderfully done. A short, but very well written piece of poetry. Always a pleasure Josh. Keep 'em coming.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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