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The Devil and Jesus
Contributed by
solmyr1404
on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 04:08:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Says the Devil,
"I hit the ball hardest."
Says the Devil,
"I throw the best curve."
Says the Devil,
"I steal the most bases."
Says the Devil,
"I rob the most home runs."
Says the Devil,
"I have the most pick-offs."
Says Jesus,
"I've stopped the most steals."
Says Jesus,
"I'm the best all-around player."
Says Jesus,
"I never lose."
Says Jesus,
"Oh, by the way,
Look who has the most saves."
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solmyr1404
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Re: The Devil and Jesus
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by poet70 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 04:18:22 PM AEST
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| HAHAHAHaH this made me laugh, I liked the way you did this, good job, very cute and different. Tammi |
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Re: The Devil and Jesus
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 05:23:02 PM AEST
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| excellent , cleverly written |
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Re: The Devil and Jesus
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by kydistortion69 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:35:52 PM AEST
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| a very good poem indeed..not my usual type of poetry but very good and poiniant.. |
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Re: The Devil and Jesus
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by kailadragon on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 10:30:35 AM AEST
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| i love this, good analogy!!! good write |
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