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Till death, do us part
Contributed by
crazygirl
on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:55:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I just want a way to stop the pain
Killin myself won't do, I'm to afraid it would hurt your
A year and a half I've been like this,
Missing you so ***** much
You're growing out of me, I can feel it
You're moving on to bigger things,leaving me only in you memory
Almost seventeen, already over me
Feeling like this sucks, I'm holding on to something that doesn't love me anymore
I tell you how much you've changed, but maybe it'z just me
You're just scared to know the person I can be
All i want is to make you feel, the amazing hold you have on me
I just would like you to see and understand
How much I care for you
And most of all the love I'll give back
Never again, like last time
Will i shatter your life and brake your soul
But forever i will be in love with you
Till death do us part....
Copyright ©
crazygirl
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2005-05-18 14:55:10]
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Re: Till death, do us part
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by heartquake on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 03:05:32 PM AEST
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| oh man, i'm so glad i read this poem... needless to say i know exactly how you feel... and i love how the poem starts all sweet and then turns to sort of an obsession... i applaud you on this write, its great in a lot of ways, one of the favorites i've read here since i joined.... I liked the second line... it describes who much more willing you are to save the feelings of the person in question rather than ending the pain that person gave you.... and the title and last line were perfect for setting the eerie mood i got from the poem... keep up the good work |
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Re: Till death, do us part
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 05:20:06 PM AEST
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| well written in the sense that it clearly lets the reader feel what the writer feels....wonderful job! |
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Re: Till death, do us part
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by Nomad062303 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 06:50:22 PM AEST
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| i like this poem... its very expressive of your feelings. keep it up, and good luck |
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