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Mr. Wonderful
Contributed by
crazygirl
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:46:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Do you remember the times we had together? Laughing, happy, just having fun
I remember the first time I went to your house, we were watching a movie, well you and Chris were
I couldnt take my eyes off of you
I remember the night when I first kissed you. The whole day you kept trying to kiss me, but I kept shying away from you
You dropped my off at my house, and just before I sent you off, I kissed you and your georgeous face
I remember your family reunion, I offered to take a picture of you all
Not sure who, but some one said, oh no your family too
I remember one of your favorite songs, like a stone by Audioslave. I remember the song pieces you sang, into my eyes; into my heart
I remember the childish things I used to do, hit you and tell you I hated you. Making up reasons to get mad at you
Finally telling you i didnt care, losing the only thing that really did care, the only thing that subsided the pain
Losing the one who just couldnt wait till i got my life together, the one whos fallen in love with someone new
The one I know I'll never have back, the one i always love
My mr. Wonderful
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2005-05-18 14:46:26]
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Re: Mr. Wonderful
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by heartquake on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:57:45 PM AEST
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| great write... i really liked it.... a lot of people might think some parts of it are a lil' trite but i really liked the little things that you add in it... shows how much you liked the guy and how much you paid attention to every little detail of his life such as his favorite song, personally i can't stand audioslave lol... but there not a platinum selling artist because of pig-headed RATM loving people like me.... but anywho, got a little off track... I liked that the poem was telling a story instead of just trying to force together related rhymes... anyway keep up the good work |
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Re: Mr. Wonderful
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:00:20 PM AEST
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| i know how u feel! in similar situation! :( |
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