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If God Was Real
Contributed by
heartquake
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:38:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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And like my last poem I've posted, take this for what you will... just my personal views... not saying anyone else's are wrong, I've always said whatever you believe in is real as long as you believe in it.... the poem gets a little trite around the third stanza but this was all written in like 5-10 minutes... I could use some feedback and perhaps a better title...
If God was real
He'd send you a sign
A sign you'd find at the end of time
But God's not real
He was just a lie
A lie you hide in the back of your mind
Cry if you will
You are in the dark
A dark so sharp that'll tear you apart
And cry you will
Right out of your heart
Your heart departs back way before the start
Your God is gone
Now ain't that a trip
A trip that rips right clean out of your grip
Is your God gone?
Heard it from your lips
Those lips that spit such blasphemous bulls---
Is your God dead
Or is it a fake
A fake to make your entire earth quake
Your God is dead
So now save some face
A face disgraced from your very own faith
Copyright ©
heartquake
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2005-05-18 14:38:37]
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Re: If God Was Real
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by colinbaker62 on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:49:57 PM AEST
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A courageous poem. Let me know if some one tries to conduct an online lynching because of these views..lol
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Re: If God Was Real
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:21:25 PM AEST
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God is real. Ooops, could you please hang on for a moment, someone just drove up my driveway.. Oh sorry, got to go, Jesus is knocking on my door, bye. later ..
Raquel Leah :D |
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