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Inside a Serial Killers Mind
Contributed by
Justingunshin
on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:20:35 PM in AEST
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Feeling the ticking inside my mind
The wonderful design with
all the different color so divine
Watching from the inside out,
picking the pieces to collect,
trying to cease away the confine
Cutting my way to combine,
my special artifact,
obsession of the kind,
feasting on those who are blind
Stitching the form, grinding down to transform,
bleaching the eyes making all the pieces fit,
this is my surprise my full creation, will arise
Copyright ©
Justingunshin
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2005-05-18 12:20:35]
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Re: Inside a Serial Killers Mind
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:02:20 PM AEST
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This is quite deep for a young mind. Well done! I love the imagery, and the message. Keep up the writing, it opens many doorways!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Inside a Serial Killers Mind
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:32:49 PM AEST
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deep and very expressive, you are wise for your years
pix xx |
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Re: Inside a Serial Killers Mind
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:28:06 AM AEST
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I agree..
this is very deep..
and extremely well written too..
M.O.H.
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Re: Inside a Serial Killers Mind
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:28:39 AM AEST
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wow Justin that was intense hon.
Lol awsome job.
Love Mom |
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Re: Inside a Serial Killers Mind
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:45:16 AM AEST
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| Very nicely done. |
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Re: Inside a Serial Killers Mind
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 11:33:21 AM AEST
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Wow...haunting...! Nice job, and so descriptive for such a short write. Well done!
Scorp. |
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