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raindrops
Contributed by
rustygrl33
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Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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as the sun hides/ the water starts to slides/ off the clouds, I can see/ i can see the blood & pain & agony/ in each raindrop above my head/ is it sad? Is it dead?/ my mind has seemed to drift off/ inside it feels numb, my brains cough/ echoes and echoes, thru and thru/ o, o, painfully so true/ as the sun hides/ the water starts to slides/ off the clouds, I can see/ that blood & pain & agony/ coming from all over me
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Re: raindrops
(User Rating: 1 ) by riverofwords on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 09:11:27 PM AEST (User
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good imagery..short to the point
lot of feeling in this in the background
peace be your journey
Terry |
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