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Face To Face
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 10:48:25 AM in AEST
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Last week we came face to face,
To see you there made my heart race,
All the memories came flooding back,
Performing their lethal attack.
I still remember what you did,
Into your rapist world I slid,
You dragged me there against my will,
Now years later I’ve climbed that hill.
I wanted to spit & tell the world,
What you did when I was just a girl,
But I am stronger than that,
So I kept it under my hat.
You should be locked far away,
Not let out so you can prey,
Prey on innocent & the vulnerable,
Dragging them with you into hell.
Even now my skin does crawl,
But you will not witness me fall,
Not again as you did years ago,
I refuse to feel your deadly blow.
The hate coursed through my veins,
But I kept hold of my emotions reigns,
You are not worth any of my tears,
I’ve shed too many over the years.
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pixie
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Re: Face To Face
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:37:03 AM AEST
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emotional write Pix Im so sorry this happened to you and yes he should be locked away in a deep dark hole the bastard
Michelle |
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Re: Face To Face
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:42:42 AM AEST
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Very strong write. I can imagine the emotions you felt when you faced off---I can relate all too well. I hope writing poetry is soul therapy for you as it is for me....Take Care.
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Re: Face To Face
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by bruised_angel on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:19:27 PM AEST
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such a powerful wright
im so sorry for your expience
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Re: Face To Face
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:36:56 PM AEST
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This is a very gut wrenching write. I am so sorry that this happened to you! I only wish that the man was in jail so he couldn't ever hurt anyone like this again. My prayers go out to you!
((((pix))))
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Face To Face
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:47:17 PM AEST
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(((((((((((((pixie))))))))))))))) here 4u . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Face To Face
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:05:11 PM AEST
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| A great write and very well written my friend. But one things for sure I’m so sorry and I could never imagine the pain you went through and then to see him face to face. My sister was raped and it ripped my heart out. I asked her to tell me who it was and I was going to kill him but she wouldn’t because she didn’t want to get me into all that. I’m sorry and I’m here for whatever when ever you need to talk. Take care and keep up with these strong writes and get it all out….Steve |
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Re: Face To Face
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:04:13 PM AEST
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Im so sorry for what happened to you. My friend who is like a little sister to was raped twice by two diferent people. it broke my heart to hear and i wanted to do anything and everything i could to those men. I hated thme and if you ever need to talk im her to share my painful expeirence with you our lidten to you and offer my comfort. Stay strong
im truely sorry
keep smiling
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Re: Face To Face
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:13:49 PM AEST
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So sorry you had to endure this pain from a man who is scum of the earth.
The judicial system is far to lenient on these animals he should have been locked away forever for what he did to you.
My heart cries out for you.
A powerful heartfelt poem. Wonderful thank you for sharing your deep emotions
It must have taken a lot of courage to write this. ((((MANY HUGS))) 4 u |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:15:05 PM AEST
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| Thanks for sharing that Krisse, I bet it wasn't so easy easy to write, yet it was still well done. |
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Re: Face To Face
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 03:12:34 PM AEST
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Krissie this was really emotionaly done. Im sorry you had to trhru this. Theres no words on how i feel about this.
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Re: Face To Face
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:15:51 PM AEST
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wow Pixie girl thats some deep write.
take care .great write
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Re: Face To Face
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:02:17 AM AEST
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Oh Pixie girl, I'm so sorry this happened to you, but you have the right attitude. Why is he still walking around to frighten you again any how?
I loved the straight forward way you placed your cards on the table.......it gives you courage and fortitude to be very postive and never again be frightened of him.
Warm love and hugs
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 01:09:29 PM AEST
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I am sorry that you had to go through that.
I know many women and young girls who have gone through that. It's a horific thing when it happens.
It will never leave your mind until you confront the problem.
I hope that you are released from the pain you feel.
GREAT WRITE
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Face To Face
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:32:34 PM AEST
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Deep painful InnerVision
Those who took advantage of us
Will get thiers in the end |
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