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°°°Rosa°°°

Contributed by OreO on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems



Aged angel woman, wrinkled little hands
It's hearts like yours that make life grand
So close to death, so full of life
Your were so profound, in both of our lives


You saved an Angel Man with your wings
You looked in his eyes, and his heart you seen
You gave him love, as him you saved
It's hearts like yours, that are so brave


Wing's black as the night, yet bright as the day
You made him live, so many more days
I'm grateful to you, and i'd give you my life
As one day he almost made me his wife


Thank you Rosa for all that you do
You truly are amazing, and i truly love you
You will always hold a key deep within my heart
Even though i know we are far apart


You had to move, you had to go
But this i feel has helped him grow
My sweet dear Rosa just know this
You hold heaven's sweet true kiss...






Copyright © OreO ... [ 2002-12-30 23:20:00]
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Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 11:26:27 PM AEST
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Very fine tribute!
Very well written.
We need more of these little old ladies on this planet.
Great write!
PEACE, LUV, JOY,
emy


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 12:00:57 AM AEST
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Oreo,this was such a beautiful tribute to her I'm sure she would have just loved it!
Bless people like that in the world,just like my father who kept my mom living more years than we thought! Great peice! Christina


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Panther_1978 on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 12:05:44 AM AEST
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awww... This is so sweet! She is a very special person to have you as a friend!!! Great write...

Panther


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 12:25:03 AM AEST
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I dont know who she is or was, but you made me feel as though she is an angel sent from heaven. Well done as always my friend.

( And btw,,,I changed my mind. :o) You know what I mean. ;o) Larry )


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Mystery_Girl on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 01:44:04 AM AEST
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Rosa sounds like a very lovely remarkable lady....and what a nice tribute u have written....take care.....Tanya.........:-)


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by InexactExactness on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 04:49:34 PM AEST
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I'm glad that you did this poem for her and even though you say she won't see it elderly women have that strange intuition to know what's going on. So I'm sure that she knows how much you love her. I loved this.
Thank You,
InexactExactness


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 05:54:39 PM AEST
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Oreo, what a great uplift, a wonderful write, have a great new year


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 05:59:53 PM AEST
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absolutely fabulous write...isn't funny how God uses everyday people as his special angels. this women i am sure will have a special place in heaven thank you for sharing with us about her


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 08:47:20 PM AEST
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This is such a beautifully written tribute to your friend. There are some people who have hearts of gold ... it's a shame she can't read it. Lovely poetry Oreo.


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by nomad on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 09:28:16 AM AEST
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What a beautiful tribute, OreO. Someday, perhaps, she will get to read this.


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 04:09:59 PM AEST
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HI OREO,
THIS IS AN AWESOME WRITE,I JUST LOVE THIS ,YOU SURE HAVE AWAY WITH WORDS.


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by fancyface4898 on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 10:35:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. I am so glad I decided to read more of your writings.


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 04:54:26 AM AEST
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Looked in his eyes, and his heart you seen-very beautiful line. you will always hold a key deep within my heart--a good poetry.Thank you for sharing your so nice feelings...Venkat.


Re: °°°Rosa°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 07:24:49 AM AEST
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Words well woven.

wordsy.




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